[劇情] 翻譯CSI:Miami 1x01 Golden Parachute(3)

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這次拖的比較久才PO出下一個部份不過目前整篇已經大致翻完，會再慢慢把剩下的PO上來依然感謝先前有回覆和觀看的版友們^^ -------------------------------------------------- SCENE #11: 第十一幕 [EXT.(註1) -- DAY] [外景 – 白天] (Speedle and Delko have found a passenger strapped in his seat next to red evidence flag #24. Speedle snaps photos of the body. Delko looks at the body, impatient to get going.) (史畢和戴可在紅色證據旗24號旁發現一位乘客被綁在位子上。史畢替屍體拍了幾張照，戴可查看著屍體，不耐煩地想開始動作。) ERIC DELKO: Hey, Herb Ritts, come on. You want to do this while we're young, or what? 艾瑞克．戴可：嘿，赫柏．瑞茨，拜託，時不我待！ TIM SPEEDLE: I need a minute. 提姆．史畢：給我一分鐘。 ERIC DELKO: Look, how about I take the pictures and you go out there and backstroke through that crap? 艾瑞克．戴可：聽著，不如我來拍照，你去外面在一堆排泄物中仰泳如何? TIM SPEEDLE: Are you all right? 提姆．史畢：你還好吧? ERIC DELKO: Yeah, I'm fine. Are you all right? 艾瑞克．戴可：我沒事，倒是你呢? HORATIO CAINE: Gentlemen? 何瑞修．肯恩：各位? (Speedle and Delko both turn toward Horatio and Megan who are standing just off to the side.) (史畢和戴可雙雙轉身，何瑞修和梅根就站在一旁。) ERIC DELKO: Sorry, H. 艾瑞克．戴可：抱歉，老何。 HORATIO CAINE: Stay focused. 何瑞修．肯恩：集中注意力。 TIM SPEEDLE: We were just talking about after a plane crash like this they used to find all these passengers without any feet. They couldn't figure out why. But it turns out there's a support bar under the seat that was acting like a guillotine. 提姆．史畢：我們剛才還在說，以前在這樣的空難後，不知道為什麼屍體都會斷腳。後來發現是因為在椅子下有根支撐桿，就像斷頭台一樣。 (As he talks, Horatio kneels down next to an empty passenger seat. He sees something. Megan kneels down next to him, looking at the same thing.) (當史畢說話時，何瑞修在旁邊的空乘客椅，蹲下看見了些什麼。梅根在他旁邊一樣蹲下，看見了一樣的東西。) HORATIO CAINE: This seat belt is unbuckled and undamaged. 何瑞修．肯恩：安全帶沒有固定住，而且完好無傷。 (Quick close-up of the dirty seat belt buckle. End of close-up.) (快速特寫在骯髒的安全帶鎖扣上。　結束特寫。) TIM SPEEDLE: Well, the flight wasn't full. That's, uh, six passengers, eight empty seats. 提姆．史畢：這架班機沒有客滿。有，痾，六名乘客，八名空位。 HORATIO CAINE: Yeah, but I've already counted nine unbuckled belts, so, that would mean one of the passengers was unbuckled during takeoff, doesn't it? 何瑞修．肯恩：是的，但我計算有九條未扣上的安全帶，那麼，也就是說起飛時有一位乘客沒有繫安全帶，對吧? TIM SPEEDLE: It might have been the guy who shot the pilot. 提姆．史畢：可能就是開槍射殺駕駛員的兇手。 (Horatio and Megan both stand up.) (何瑞修和梅根站起。) HORATIO CAINE: It might have been. 何瑞修．肯恩：有可能。 (Speedle turns and walks away. Megan looks around at the other workers.) (史畢轉身走遠，梅根四處查看其他的隊員們。) MEGAN DONNER: How's everyone holding up? 梅根．唐那：大家狀況還好嗎? HORATIO CAINE: They're fine. They're doing their jobs. 何瑞修．肯恩：他們很好，盡忠職守著。 (Horatio reaches down and picks up a briefcase.) (何瑞修伸手拾起一個公事包。) CUT TO: 鏡頭切換： ----------------------註解線-------------------- (註1) EXT. 後來有好心版友指點為exterior，也就是我們一般俗稱的外景不過大部分把它省略翻譯，因為括號內主要是說明地點和時間後面會出現INT. 和EXT.則是相反的字詞 ----------------------註解線-------------------- SCENE #12: 第十二幕 [EXT. TENT -- DAY] [帳篷 – 白天] (Horatio forces the briefcase open. He finds it empty. Calleigh is in the tent working on something else.) (何瑞修用力打開公事包，發現裡面是空的。卡莉在帳篷內忙別的事。) CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: What have you got? 卡莉．杜肯：你找到什麼? HORATIO CAINE: Nothing. 何瑞修．肯恩：什麼都沒有。 (Calleigh stands up and walks over to Horatio.) (卡莉站起走向何瑞修。) HORATIO CAINE: Not a pen, not a piece of paper not a paper clip -- nothing. Who travels with an empty briefcase? That's odd, right? 何瑞修．肯恩：沒有筆，沒有紙，沒有迴紋針 – 都沒有。誰會帶著一個空公事包旅行? 很奇怪吧? CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Yeah. 卡莉．杜肯：是啊。 ERIC DELKO: (o.s. shout) H, come on! 艾瑞克．戴可：(鏡頭外大喊) 老何，快過來！ (o.s. = off screen) CUT TO: 鏡頭切換： SCENE #13: 第十三幕 [EXT. - DAY -- CONTINUOUS] [外景 – 白天 – 持續著] (Delko and a couple of officers carry a man onto the ground,) (戴可和一對警官扛著一名男性來到地上。) ERIC DELKO: (shouts) Rescue, I need a paramedic, now! 艾瑞克．戴可：(大喊) 我需要醫護人員，快點！ (They put the man down on the ground.) (他們把男人放置地面。) ERIC DELKO: We got one with a pulse! 艾瑞克．戴可：他還有脈搏！ (Water spurts from the man's mouth as Delko presses down on the man's chest.) (戴可按壓男人胸部，他吐出水來。) HORATIO CAINE: (o.s.) Eric, don't let him go into shock! 何瑞修．肯恩：(鏡頭外) 艾瑞克，別讓他陷入休克！ (Horatio runs toward them and grabs a blanket. He opens the blanket and covers the man as he kneels down next to Delko.) (何瑞修跑向他們並抓著一條毯子，在戴可旁跪下，並打開毯子蓋在男人身上。) ERIC DELKO: Got a pulse, H! 艾瑞克．戴可：有脈搏了，老何！ HORATIO CAINE: Sir, sir, can you hear me?! Stay with us! 何瑞修．肯恩：先生，先生，聽得到嗎?! 保持清醒! ERIC DELKO: Breathe, breathe! 艾瑞克．戴可：呼吸，呼吸！ HORATIO CAINE: Stay with us! 何瑞修．肯恩：保持清醒！ FADE TO BLACK. 鏡頭淡出 (COMMERCIAL SET) (廣告時間) FADE IN 鏡頭淡入 [EXT. VARIOUS EVERGLADES (STOCK) - DAY] [各種沼澤地景色 – 白天] (STOCK)的話，和人討論後推測應該是指在實地拍攝的外景 SCENE #14: 第十四幕： [EXT. LEVEE 67 -- DAY] [67號堤防 – 白天] (The paramedics carry the survivor on a stretcher. Horatio is on the phone walking along side them.) (醫護人員將生還者抬上擔架，何瑞修邊講電話邊陪他們走。) HORATIO CAINE: (to phone) Okay, I'll meet you there. Good. 何瑞修．肯恩：(對著電話) 好的，我在那裏和你碰面。很好。 (Delko jogs to catch up with them. He fills Horatio in on the man's identity.) (戴可小跑步追上他們，告訴何瑞修關於生還者的身分。) ERIC DELKO: H, we got a Scott Erik Sommer. Resides in Gables Estates. 艾瑞克．戴可：老何，他叫史考特．艾瑞克．薩默，住在蓋布爾莊園。 HORATIO CAINE: He's unconscious but hold on, guys. 何瑞修．肯恩：他仍陷入昏迷，但是等一下各位。 (The paramedics stop.) (醫護人員們停住。) ERIC DELKO: Well, he can't tell us anything then. 艾瑞克．戴可：他沒辦法告訴我們任何事。 HORATIO CAINE: Maybe he can. 何瑞修．肯恩：也許他可以。 (Horatio looks at Scott Erik Sommer's jacket and clothes.) (何瑞修看著史考特的外套和衣服。) HORATIO CAINE: What do you see? No friction burn, right? Means no seat belt. 何瑞修．肯恩：你們沒發現嗎? 沒有摩擦性燒傷，對吧? 也就是說沒繫安全帶。 ERIC DELKO: So, he might be our shooter. 艾瑞克．戴可：那麼他可能是我們的槍手。 HORATIO CAINE: Yes. The question then becomes why would you shoot your own pilot? Thank you, gentlemen. 何瑞修．肯恩：是的。現在問題變成為什麼你射殺自己的駕駛員? 謝謝各位。 (The medics carry the stretcher off screen. Horatio turns and motions to the helicopter that's about the land.) (醫護人員們抬著擔架離開鏡頭外。何瑞修轉身示意直升機著陸。) MEGAN DONNER: Horatio? 梅根．唐那：何瑞修? (Megan walks up to Horatio. He turns around.) (梅根走向他，何瑞修轉身過來。) HORATIO CAINE: Yeah. 何瑞修．肯恩：是的。 MEGAN DONNER: Got a call about a floater five miles from here. 梅根．唐那：接獲關於一具浮屍的通報，離這裡五哩遠。 HORATIO CAINE: I ... I can't possibly take another scene right now. 何瑞修．肯恩：我…我現在不可能再處理另一個現場。 MEGAN DONNER: Horatio, it is your scene. 梅根．唐那：何瑞修，這是你的現場。 CUT TO: 鏡頭切換： [EXT. EVERGLADES (STOCK) -- DAY] [沼澤地 – 白天] (Camera moves low and fast along the everglades toward the new spot five miles away.) (壓低的鏡頭快速地沿著大沼澤地朝向五哩遠的新地點。) SCENE #15: 第十五幕 [EXT. FIVE MILES FROM LEVEE -- DAY] [離堤防五哩遠處 – 白天] (A womans' body floats face-down in the waters. Horatio and Megan stand in the boat just next to the body. Horatio looks up at the sky.) (一名女屍臉朝下浮在水上。何瑞修和梅根站在屍體旁的船上，何瑞修看向天空。) HORATIO CAINE: Oh-kay. 何瑞修．肯恩：好的。 (Megan also looks up at the sky.) (梅根也抬頭看向天空) ALEXX WOODS: (v.o.) How did you get so far away from your friends? 艾利絲．伍德：(旁白口吻) 妳是怎麼離其他人那麼遠的? 　　　　　　　(v.o. = voice over 抱歉打錯了囧)　 CUT TO: 鏡頭切換： SCENE #16: 第十六幕 [INT. CSI - FORENSIC AUTOPSY -- DAY] [CSI驗屍室 – 白天] (Alexx Woods prepares to examine the body of the woman found. She puts her gloves on.) (艾利絲．伍德準備替發現的女性驗屍，她戴上手套。) ALEXX WOODS: (to the body) Did you fall out of that plane? Is that how you ended up all alone out there? All by yourself? 艾利絲．伍德：(和屍體講話) 妳是摔出飛機，才孤單一個人在那裡嗎? (Alexx brushes the hair away from the body's face.) (艾利絲把屍體臉上的頭髮拂開) ALEXX WOODS: (to the body) In more ways than one, I'll bet. Only woman on board. That couldn't have been easy. You were with them but not one of them. 艾利絲．伍德：(和屍體講話) 我打賭很多層面都是這樣。機上唯一的女性，這可不簡單。妳和他們在一起，卻不屬於他們任何一個。 (Behind her, Megan listens and turns around.) (梅根在艾莉絲後面聽著，然後轉身。) MEGAN DONNER: "All-boys express." Been on that flight. 梅根．唐那：”男人俱樂部”，我懂那感覺。 (Without turning around, Alexx shares a smile with her.) (艾利絲沒回頭，但莞爾一笑。) HORATIO CAINE: (o.s.) (overhead) Ladies ... 何瑞修．肯恩：(鏡頭外) (從頭頂上方) 女士們… (Megan and Alexx look up. From the viewbox above, Horatio watches.) (兩人抬頭看，何瑞修從觀察區看著。) HORATIO CAINE: We may have an ID on the flight plan. "Christina Maria Colucci" was Sommer's senior accountant. 何瑞修．肯恩：飛行計畫上有她的身分，”克莉絲提娜．瑪麗亞．克魯奇”，是薩默的資深會計師。 ALEXX WOODS: (smiles to the body) Hello, Christina. 艾利絲．伍德：(對屍體微笑) 哈囉，克莉絲提娜。 (Alexx moves the cloth covering the body a little lower. Horatio watches from the computer monitor up above.) (艾利絲把蓋在屍體上的衣服稍微往下移，何瑞修從上方的電腦螢幕觀察著。) ALEXX WOODS: (over speaker) Preliminary exam indicates no friction burns on her lower torso. 艾利絲．伍德：(透過擴音器) 初步檢查指出下半部沒有摩擦性燒傷。 HORATIO CAINE: Which also means no seat belt and a second passenger was out of their seat. I rule out the bathroom, then. 何瑞修．肯恩：也就是說，沒有繫安全帶，而且是第二位不在位子上的乘客。那麼就不是洗手間了。 MEGAN DONNER: Mile-high club? 梅根．唐那：高空俱樂部? HORATIO CAINE: I don't think so. It's such a small plane, it would be hard to have an indiscreet affair with your boss, I think. 何瑞修．肯恩：我不認為。這是小型客機，要和你的老闆偷情可不容易。 MEGAN DONNER: Not if he was picking up the tab. This stuff's all designer. 梅根．唐那：不然就是他付的帳，這東西可是有品牌的。 (She picks up a red, high-heeled shoe.) (她拿起一隻紅色高跟鞋。) MEGAN DONNER: Red suede. 450 bucks a pair. Price alone could have killed her. 梅根．唐那：紅色麂皮，一雙450美元。光是價錢就足夠殺死她了。 (Horatio chuckles softly. A tech passes a file to him. He takes it and listens.) (何瑞修輕聲地笑了笑，一名技師遞文件給他，他接過傾聽著。) ALEXX WOODS: I put a rush on her tox screen. Blood alcohol is point-o-nine. 艾利絲．伍德：我替她做了毒物檢測，血液中酒精濃度為0.09。 MEGAN DONNER: Legally drunk at eight o'clock in the morning? 梅根．唐那：早上八點就在喝酒? ALEXX WOODS: We also found traces of fluoxetine. She was on prozac. 艾利絲．伍德：還發現了微量的氟西汀，她曾服用百憂解。 MEGAN DONNER: Who isn't? 梅根．唐那：誰不是呢? (Megan looks up and sees Horatio reading a file.) (梅根抬頭看，何瑞修正讀著一份文件。) MEGAN DONNER: Anything you want to share? 梅根．唐那：有任何要分享的嗎? HORATIO CAINE: Not currently. Could I have a grid, please? 何瑞修．肯恩：目前還沒有，可否讓我看一下網格圖? (The monitor above Horatio shows the body on the examining table. A green-lined grid appears over the monitor.) (何瑞修上方的螢幕顯示出驗屍台上的屍體，綠色線條的網格圖布滿整個螢幕。) HORATIO CAINE: C-six enlarged, please. 何瑞修．肯恩：請放大C6肌群。 (A blocked portion of the body's right arm enlarges.) (屍體右手的部分區塊被放大了。) HORATIO CAINE: Zoom times four and hold. 何瑞修．肯恩：請放大四倍並停住。 (The monitor shows a close up of the two circular marks on her right hand.) (螢幕特寫在她右手上的兩個圓形記號。) HORATIO CAINE: Zoom eight times and hold. 何瑞修．肯恩：請放大八倍並停住。 (The monitor shows an extreme close up of the marks on her right hand.) (螢幕放大特寫在她右手上的傷痕。) HORATIO CAINE: (quietly) What in the heck are those? 何瑞修．肯恩：(輕聲地) 那些到底是什麼? (Down on the floor below, Alexx turns away from the monitor and reaches for the body's hand.) (在下方的樓層，愛莉絲從螢幕轉過頭，檢查屍體的手。) ALEXX WOODS: Could be impact related. 艾利絲．伍德：可能是撞擊造成的。 MEGAN DONNER: Something she hit? 梅根．唐那：她撞到東西? HORATIO CAINE: Or something that hit her. 何瑞修．肯恩：或是東西撞到她。 (Quick flash of: [INT. AIR PLANE - DAY] The plane is crashing and items on board are flying wildly in the cabin. The other passengers shout with alarm in the chaos.) (快速閃現：[飛機內 – 白天] 飛機正在墜毀，艙內的物品正四處飛竄，其餘乘客處於一片混亂叫喊著。) (End of flash.) (結束閃現。) CUT TO: 鏡頭切換： SCENE #17: 第十七幕 [INT. CSI - HORATIO'S OFFICE -- DAY] [CSI何瑞修的辦公室 – 白天] (Open on a photo of Christina Colucci.) (克莉絲提娜．克魯奇的照片打開著。) HORATIO CAINE: She's a lovely girl. 何瑞修．肯恩：她是個可愛的女孩。 (Horatio looks at the photo for a moment, then puts it aside.) (何瑞修注視著照片片刻，然後放到一旁。) HORATIO CAINE: Mrs. Colucci, I found this at the crash site. 何瑞修．肯恩：克魯奇夫人，我在墜毀現場發現這個。 (Horatio shows Mrs. Colucci a photo of Christina's briefcase.) (他給克魯奇夫人看一張克莉絲提娜的公事包照片。) HORATIO CAINE: It was empty and it has what I believe are Christina's initials on it. I was wondering if that belonged to her. 何瑞修．肯恩：它是空的，而且有我確信是她的首字母在上頭，我想知道這是否屬於她。 MRS. COLUCCI: (crying) We, um ... we gave that to her when she got her promotion. 克魯奇夫人：(哭泣著) 這…這是我們送給她當做升遷之禮的。 (He puts the photo aside.) (何瑞修把照片放到一旁。) HORATIO CAINE: Has she, um ... recently ... suffered any setbacks either personally or professionally? 何瑞修．肯恩：她…最近…是否個人或事業上有遭受任何挫折? MRS. COLUCCI: Not that I know of. (He nods.) My daughter battled depression when she was in high school. That was a very long time ago. She would never try to hurt herself ... would she? 克魯奇夫人：據我所知沒有。(何瑞修點頭) 我女兒高中時曾憂鬱症纏身，已經是很久以前的事了。她不會故意傷害自己…會嗎? HORATIO CAINE: I don't know. 何瑞修．肯恩：我並不清楚。 MRS. COLUCCI: Ever since she was a little girl she was so good at keeping secrets. 克魯奇夫人：這孩子從小就很懂得保密。 (She starts crying.) (她開始大哭。) MRS. COLUCCI: Will you help me, please? 克魯奇夫人：你會幫我嗎? HORATIO CAINE: (nods) I will. 何瑞修．肯恩：(點頭) 我會的。 (Mrs. Colucci cries. Horatio reaches over and puts his hand over her hand.) (克魯奇夫人仍哭泣著，何瑞修伸手過去放在她的手上。) HORATIO CAINE: I will. 何瑞修．肯恩：我會的。 CUT TO: 鏡頭切換： SCENE #18: 第十八幕 [EXT. TENT -- DAY] [帳篷 – 白天] (Calleigh is looking through a scope.) (卡莉正透過內視鏡檢查。) [SCOPE VIEW: The rivets in the plane's structure.) [內視鏡影像：飛機結構上的螺栓。] (The NTSB Technician walks up to her as she works.) (NTSB技師走向她) NTSB TECHNICIAN: Never seen one of those before. NTSB技師：從來沒見過這種東西。 CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: This old thing? 卡莉．杜肯：這舊玩意? NTSB TECHNICIAN: Yeah. NTSB技師：是啊。 CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: It's a borescope. 卡莉．杜肯：這是內視鏡。 (She pulls out the tip of the scope and holds it up for the NTSB Technician to look at. He takes off his cap.) (她把內視鏡頂端拿出來，交給技師查看，他脫掉帽子。) CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: The SWAT boys use it for a sneak and peek. I think it's kind of cute. 卡莉．杜肯：霹靂小組做秘密蒐證用的，我認為還蠻可愛的。 (The tip of the scope wiggles to and fro.) (內視鏡頂端來回轉動著。) NTSB TECHNICIAN: Can I take a peek? NTSB技師：我能看一下嗎? CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Be my guest. 卡莉．杜肯：別客氣。 (Calleigh inserts the scope tip back into the plane structure. The NTSB Technician reaches for the eye piece.) (卡莉將配件插回去飛機結構內，技師伸手去拿目鏡) NTSB TECHNICIAN: So, uh ... what exactly are we looking for here? NTSB技師：那麼…我們到底在找什麼? (He looks at the scope.) (他看著內視鏡。) CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Ballistics evidence. We think we may have had a shooting on the plane but so far, nada. 卡莉．杜肯：彈道痕跡。我們認為飛機上有發生過槍擊，但目前為止還找不到證據。 NTSB TECHNICIAN: You know, I heard of you. You're the, uh, the "Bullet Girl," right? NTSB技師：妳知道，我聽過妳。妳是那個，”子彈女孩”，對吧? (Calleigh smiles as she reaches for the eye piece.) (卡莉取回目鏡時笑了笑。) CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: What does that make you? "Airplane boy?" 卡莉．杜肯：那你叫什麼? “飛機男孩?” NTSB TECHNICIAN: Yeah, I guess you could say I know my way around an airframe. NTSB技師：是啊，我猜妳可以說我是飛機通。 CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Really? Then what are those? 卡莉．杜肯：真的? 那那些是什麼? (After looking through the eye piece, she pushes it toward the NTSB Technician. He looks through it.) (卡莉透過目鏡檢查後，指出給技師看，他也透過目鏡看。) [SCOPE VIEW: Etchings on a bayonet pin.] [內視鏡影像：螺栓上的刻痕。] NTSB TECHNICIAN: Those are bayonet pins. They hold the door shut. NTSB技師：那是螺栓，用來維持逃生門緊閉的。 CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Oh, I know that. I meant what are those? 卡莉．杜肯：我知道那個，我是說那些是什麼? (SCOPE VIEW: Extreme close up of the etchings on the bayonet pin.) (內視鏡影像：相當靠近的特寫在螺栓上的刻痕。) NTSB TECHNICIAN: Some type of scoring. Could mean the door failed. NTSB技師：像某種刻痕，可能是造成逃生門故障的原因。 CALLEIGH DUQUESNE: Or someone wanted it to. 卡莉．杜肯：或是某人刻意的。 (They look at each other.) (她們看著彼此。) CUT TO: 鏡頭切換： -------------------------------------------------- 怕頁數過多所以先暫時PO到這裡其實還是好多(￣￣；) 這次拖比較久是因為有看過影片和多次的校對討論比起上次也沒那麼多地方做記號仍然歡迎版友們給予任何建議^^ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 59.113.100.60 ※ 編輯: DanielH 來自: 218.175.144.193 (08/06 00:35)