[翻譯] Estatic Fear - Chapter IV

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Estatic Fear - A Sombre Dance - Chapter IV (女聲) The leafs and I entangled dance a harmonie I dare not stain with vain delight 落葉與我糾結在一起，共譜一支和諧的舞我不敢以徒然的欣喜來玷污這一切 And thus embraced we roam the passing eve like a pilgrim who craves a shelters guiding light 於是即將流逝的黃昏擁抱著徘徊的我們就像朝聖者渴望著那道指引他得到庇護的光般 I question thee, beloved night to calm my joy so that I not like the weary leaves be strewed 我詢問著汝，那心愛的夜晚讓我的歡欣冷靜為此我不想像那散落滿地的疲累葉子 For I submitt to thy solitary grace (as) even springs life is by winters gaze subdued 因此我屈服於你(如同)泉水般的的寂寞優雅生命凋零於冬天柔和的凝視下 (男聲) Lost in a dream I beheld a maiden dance And when she sat down by a sliver stream Plunging her feet in the shallow waves 迷失在夢中我望見了少女之舞當她坐在溪流旁雙足浸在淺淺的水波中 A mist descended, kissed her and fled And all that's before been just and fair 一片濃霧襲來親吻了她然後消逝而去所有的一切都發生在一片寧靜中 Shattered in a rain of crystal shards Each of them a cry, a dream, a tear 如水晶碎裂般的雨每一滴都是一聲哭喊一場空夢一滴淚水 (詠唱) Nunquam submergiove aut diffugo Ira inflammata mea vita ad salutem nominarit Et solitudo meurn robur (男聲) Everlasting be the war that I declare Extinguished thy bewitched spark despair 我斷言永無止盡的戰爭使你的熱情陶醉之火熄滅令你絕望 Torched the pile upon which you Are gathered (still) poisoning my weary heart 堆積而上的火矩是你聚集在一起來(繼續)荼毒我疲憊的心 And as the forked fires tongue licks high I won't lament thy fall 就像分叉的火舌不斷的衝高我不會哀悼你的墮落 But dance around the burning branches urged by furys call 但是圍繞在營火的舞被狂暴的呼喊所喚起 And I again shall not be humble slaves but king to thee 而我又再一次不想繼續當謙遜的奴隸而是作為王者君臨在汝之上 (女聲) Dreams on the barren field did lay strewed 是我散落於遍地，在荒蕪的大地上做著夢嗎？ Spread their wings rise up with solemn hope imbued 展開他們的羽翼，藉由神聖的希望升起 Ascend the stary stairs into a plain but dear refuge 登上星空般的階梯進入一個樸素卻珍貴的庇護所 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 心得文開始@@ 這是不才在下第一次翻譯歌詞所以不敢說翻譯到信達雅　的地步甚至我認為還會有不少錯誤的情況發生不過也是拋磚引玉，希望有人可以把中間那段似乎是奧地利文的段落翻譯出來至於翻譯過程中有錯誤的地方，也希望各位大大不吝指正會翻譯是因為很喜歡Estatic Fear這個團尤其是第二張專輯：A Sombre Dance 把　寂靜優美與陰鬱狂暴給完美的結合在一起聽完後甚至有股悵然落淚的感覺其中 Chapter IV 也是這張專輯中我最愛的一首歌所以當然就拿這首歌來開刀了會翻譯還有一個原因是想藉由翻譯來更了解歌詞的含意不過我發現我翻完之後，還是不太了解這首歌真正想表達的內涵..真是汗顏如果有人可以提供歌詞的典故或是含意，小弟我會很感激的@@ 最後謝謝大家看完我的這篇歌詞翻譯 ~ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 220.139.134.234 ※ 編輯: Riot 來自: 220.139.134.234 (06/19 23:03)

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