[翻譯] Opeth - Bleak

看板RockMetal (金屬音樂板)作者hutdris時間16年前 (2009/12/15 18:29)推噓12(12推 0噓 0→)

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這首是我聽Opeth的第一首也是我嘗試翻譯的第一次如有謬誤還請多多指教摟 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dB1NuL-8Dhc

Opeth-Bleak Beating Heart still beating for the cause Feeding Soul still feeding from the loss Aching Limbs are aching from the rush Fading You are fading from my sight 悸動內心仍然為之悸動眷養以失敗為食眷養靈魄刺痛軀幹自倉皇而生的刺痛消逝你將從我的視界消逝 Break of morning, coldness lingers on Shroud me into nightmares of the sun 雖已破曉，椎心冰寒仍不肯離去為我纏上壽衣埋入日魘末境 Moving I am moving closer to your side Luring You are luring me into the night Crying Who is crying for you here Dying I am dying fast inside your tears 飄移飄移至有妳之側魅惑妳正是那誘我入夜的魅惑者悲鳴誰在為妳悲鳴呢? 死亡妳的淚水催化著我的死亡 Plunging towards bereavement faster yet Clearing thoughts, my mind is set 急墮入哀慟淵藪雖保清醒意識，心神已然衰敗 Devious movements in your eyes Moved me from relief Breath comes out white clouds with your lies And filters through me You're close to the final word You're staring right past me in dismay 妳眼中閃爍的曖昧游移著將我從救贖中拖離妳的謊游離在白色氣息中迫我一一沉濾接近那最終話語時妳將驚慌啟程離我遠去 A liquid seeps from your chest And drains me away Mist ripples round your thin white neck And draws me a line Cold fingers mark this dying wreck This moment is mine 一絲濕潤從妳胸前滲出將我吸榨成乾環繞在妳細白頸側之霧讓我被拉扯成線冷酷纖指標記了這場死亡毀滅而這是屬於我的時刻 Help me cure you Atone for all you've done Help me leave you As all the days are gone 助我療妳償回妳所作所為助我離妳一如往日已逝重複段略 Night falls again Taking what's left of me 夜幕再次降臨密語著我的離去 Slight twist, shivering corpse Ornated with water, fills the cracks Clasped in my limbs by tradition This is all you need 細長繩環輕顫屍骸浮華以水注滿裂痕縛我從法汝願將償 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 118.171.113.218