[創作]唱這麼爛 不批給他死像話嗎?
http://www.wretch.cc/blog/choder/20265415
這首歌唱的有夠ㄍㄧㄥ的
這次敢po上來我真的很有誠意
大家多準備幾支鞭子吧
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也不是以退為進
以前很少在vocal板po文
來這裡並不是想聽一些好聽的話而是中肯一針見血的意見
因為我想要成為像師兄們甚至老師那樣唱歌好聽的歌手
若是自滿則會裹足不前
我自己也知道自己大概有哪些問題
但有些自己看不見的地方希望各位先進不吝指教感激不盡..
附上歌詞
Vocal歌詞:
(Verse)
I know this time, I know for whole my life
I know inside, I know this kind of sigh
Ho~~~~~~~ Ho~~~~~~~~~
(Chours)
Rright from this time we get here ,
Everytime we take it,
In this world I got no regrate
Coming to this world
We should treasure our fate
Oh Find my way
(Verse)
(Chours)
Look back your life and be sure
Listen your heart feel yourself in heaven
Look back, Look back your life
Listen your heart feel yourself in heaven
Right from the life time
Changes we take it oh
got no regrate
Coming to this world
We should treasure our fate
Oh find my way
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