[創作] Sonnet for My Guitar
生命中第一首創作十四行詩
用了嚴格的古典押韻結構
音樂部分完成的話有機會在波出來分享 ^. ^
A tender lullaby from Mother Earth's womb crooned
Have you, my ageless colleen so faithful;
And never again do yesterday's residues wound
At dawn an innocent child's morrow so juvenile.
Always fervently to a night-time jig you invite me
When by the window panes chants a nightingale
With tunes wafting over the vineyards all too lovely–
To which Bacchus echoes with many an aromatic tale;
And on the Isle of Ionian are folklores weaved
When the scale of merry notes we ascend
With Mr. Potter's ever magical brooms conceived
By crafts of spiraling imagination that never descend.
Now in Dublin Mr. Bloom's traces the zephyr scours–
Shall we recruit seamen and sail for those timeless hours?
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Notes:
Line 2: 我最愛的吉他Lowden是愛爾蘭的師父手工打造的,
所以我用"colleen"來表示我的琴是"愛爾蘭的姑娘"
Line 8: Bacchus即酒神
Line 9: Ionian是調式音階的第一級, 也就是一般的大調音階,
給聽者自然而歡愉的感受.
Line 13: 提到了James Joyce在Ulysses中的主角Leopold Bloom
Line 14: 表示我的琴漂洋過海到台灣, 在秋天的葉灑落人間時,
開始思念起遙遠的故鄉愛爾蘭了.
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