[翻譯] Pain of Salvation - Remedy Lane １

看板RockMetal (金屬音樂板)作者coolfly (如腐敗入骨，如身居火宅)時間17年前 (2009/04/27 11:17)推噓11(11推 0噓 3→)

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因發現Dark Lyrics所刊歌詞訛誤處不少（翻了一半才發現……又笨又血淚Orz）兼之小妹無歌詞本，所以只好以官網歌詞為準 http://www.painofsalvation.com/albums/remedy/lyrics.htm Remedy Lane的歌詞極為詩意，有時顯得隱晦儘管小妹在翻譯時已力求意思正確，以及貼近詞中氣氛但仍恐不免有誤譯或脫漏之處，還望各位不吝指正 Remedy Lane 靈藥巷 1. Of Two Beginnings 雙方開始 Pain of Salvation She is twelve I’m only ten Buried in this soft mountain of pillows Parents away She asks me have I been touched Have I done the thing with anyone yet Silence A shy “no” 她十二歲，我才十歲埋沒在柔軟的枕頭山中爸媽出遠門去了她問我有沒有經驗有沒有跟別人做過這種事？沉默然後是個害羞的「沒有」 And there’s nothing that we’d rather share Than that bodily warmth if we’d dare But she’s already twelve And I am Just a child Warm and shy 只要我們有膽量，除了肉體的溫暖我們之間沒有更迫切想與彼此分享的事物但她已經十二歲而我只是個孩子熱情而又害羞 She’s so old Already twelve And I am Only ten That was me Young and free There and then 她年紀很大已經十二歲了而我才十歲那就是我彼時彼地年紀尚幼，無拘無束 Now in this hotel room I lie wondering who I am Never quite as sure after a life of questioning Finding out at last that freedom is a state of mind But still not knowing how to get along with this mankind 現在我躺在旅館的床上，思考著自己究竟是怎樣的人整整一生都充滿困惑，如今首度如此感到確實終於發現自由其實是種心理狀態但依然不懂如何與世人相處 Finding out at last that freedom is A state of mind... 終於發現，自由其實是一種心理狀態…… （高仕艷　譯） -- Moi, Peiere Reviere, ayant egorge ma mere, ma soeur et mon frere…… -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 118.170.72.139