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※ 引述《Articuno (口袋宇宙猴子退散)》之銘言： : 大衛說：「我們有15條規則，我教這些規則就是希望如果有人再拍類似的電影，他文長恕刪。我對這15條規則感到好奇，古了一下將原文貼在下面。 1.喺OKE ON A JOKE: Two jokes at the same time cancel each other out. When an a ctor delivers a punchline, it should be done seriously. It dilutes the comedy to try to be funny on top of it. Likewise, if there is something silly going o n in the background, the foreground action must be free of jokes and vice-vers a. 2.孭CKNOWLEDGEMENT: Actors in the foreground must ignore jokes happening behin d them. At the end of Naked Gun, Priscilla Presley tells Leslie Nielsen, “Eve rybody needs a friend like you.” They never acknowledge O.J. Simpson’s wheel chair careening down the steps and launching him into the air. 3.吚NRELATED BACKGROUND: A joke happening in the background must be related in some way to the action in the foreground. The reason why the O.J. Simpson jok e works is because he’s flying through the air as a result of being slapped o n the back by Drebin. 4.脷REAKING THE FRAME: Don’t remind the audience that they’re watching a mov ie. This is the rule most often legally bypassed, but a movie has to be a stro ng one to withstand more than one or two of these. 5.糍RIVIA: A joke using references so arcane that few people will ever get it. 6.喺ERRY LEWIS:餸on’t use a comedian in a straight man role. Scenes in a paro dy ought to mimic the real thing. That means, basically, follow Rule #1. You’ ve got funny lines in the script. If you add comedians (and “funny” characte r names, “funny” wardrobe, etc.), it’s a joke on a joke. 7.孭XE GRINDING: When the joke is overshadowed by some message, it gets unfunn y fast. 8.嚒ELF CONSCIOUS: Any jokes about the movie itself, the movie business, or co medy itself. A strict no-no because it prevents the audience from being invest ed in plot and character. 9.嚒TRAW DUMMY: Where the intended target is set up by the writer instead of r eal life. Even if the joke hits the target, who cares? 10.AN YOU LIVE WITH IT?: Once a joke is made, it can’t be allowed to hang a round after the initial laughs. In Naked Gun, Frank and Ed are seated in a car , their lips turned ridiculously pink from the pistachio nuts they’re munchin g. But one scene later, when Frank goes snooping in the bad guy’s apartment, he’s got to be clean. It’s kind of like buying a personalized license plate. How long can “I H8 MEN” be funny? 11.糍HAT DIDN’T HAPPEN: Something that totally defies all logic but is on and off the screen so fast that we get away with it. Example: Robert Stack in Air plane! yells to Lloyd Bridges, “He can’t land, they’re on instruments!” An d of course we cut to the cockpit and four of the actors are playing musical i nstruments. Seconds later, in the next scene, the saxophone and clarinets have disappeared. If it’s done right, no one in the audience will ask where the i nstruments went. 12.㗒ATE HIT: You know a particular target has had enough when it’s been rake d over the coals by Leno, Letterman, the MTV Awards, etc. 13.糍ECHNICAL嘭IZZAZZ: Special effects don’t necessarily mean funny. 14.㗎ANGING ON: Don’t play a joke too long. When it’s reached its peak, get the scissors. 15.糍HERE ARE NO RULES -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc), 來自: 223.137.177.136 (臺灣) ※ 文章網址: https://www.ptt.cc/bbs/movie/M.1763460652.A.7F9.html