首次嚐試的fan fiction 不是PG級!!!

看板the_L_word (拉子/女女/泛同志影音)作者likegisele24 (oh~my Jennifer)時間19年前 (2006/04/14 22:41)推噓7(7推 0噓 15→)

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耶~~終於熬過期中考了~~^^...(雖然不知道是生還還是陣亡....) 日前看了K大的自編自導無人演之TB主軸..... 讓我也興起了想試試看的念頭... 因為想要挑戰http://fanfiction.l-word.com 所以當然是得用英文了....嗚!!因為語文能力不夠好.... 才想先試PO在這裡....希望有英文強的大大可以幫忙校稿囉~~ (免得丟臉丟到太平洋對面去了...QQ~~) 故事設定可以接在S3之後也可以是一個TB different beginning~ 希望大家可以給個意見囉~~ PS.不能忍受比較粗魯言語的大大們....就...別在往下看囉~~ Ch.1 The blond was startled by the ring tone of cell goes off. It was singing “I can see a liar, sitting by the fire~” She realized that was not her cell. And reached out to shook the naked beauty. “Wake up. Bette. Your phone is ringing.” Bette buried her face into pillow and mumbled “fuck~”. She extended her hand to the night stand got her cell when eyes still shut. “Hello~” “Where the fuck are you? You'd supposed to meet me at planet. I am here almost one hour” Alice’s annoyed voice yelled through Bette still cloudy brain from the line another end. “God!!! Can u please quit shout. Damn it! I have the most worse hangover in the world it likes some one have pounded my head out” “So where the hell are you? Are you home or are you end up with some random hot chick somewhere last night Again? “Alice still annoyed with Bette. “Please don’t start. I have a most headache and a stranger lay on my bed by my side. I haven’t even known her name. Dammit!” “Whatever. Just get your ass out of bed and meet me at planet SOON” “okay. Okay. I’ll be there in 30 minutes” The phone went disconnected. Bette jumped in a quick shower and dressed prepare go out to planet. When she reached the front door and realized she have some one in her bed. She yelled toward the bedroom. “Lock the door on your way out” then jumped in her Porsche headed to the coffee shop at the West Hollywood (WeHo). When the walked goddess entered the planet dressed in black low back jeans and white blouse with leather jacket and also worm boot and sunglasses on the head. Everyone just stared at her and mouth opened admire how a damn hot gorgeous. Bette collapsed on a chair opposite Alice. Then yelled to Marina “coffee, make it strong, please! Baby” “So spill it. Who’s that lucky girl this time?” said Alice. “Well, I don’t even know her. I just picked her up at the celebration party after the show. I was drunk and have no idea how we went to my house last night. Fuck! My head is hell. Marina! Honey! Where is my shot? I am dying” Marina brought the mug with the fruit salad and sat next Bette then lean in placed a kiss on Bette’s cheek. “Hey~ what’s up” Bette quick took a sip didn’t answer. “She did that Again. Had wild sex with random hottie that she picked up on her way out of party” Alice stated. “How do you know it was wild?” Bette defends. “Easy! Look who was too carry away to left a mark on your neck” Alice spotted. Bette panicky dug into her purse searched the mirror to check her neck. She gasped when spotted the red mark. “God damn that crazy bitch. It’s so apparent and I have a show today, what could I do with this?” “Calm down, honey, it’s not big deal” said Marina when she rubbed Bette’s back. “Well, it’s not like you are the one performed the show, come on! You are a professional and successful model agent in the WeHo. You can handle it” said Alice. “Also the most incredible fucker in the lesbian community ” Alice sarcastically. “Excuse me?” Bette rose her tone. Alice shrugs. “Whatever, just get in the business now” Bette demanded. continue??? 獻醜了.....請大家給點意見吧~~^^......感激!! PPS.如果有續篇...我會另外找連結點....免得在這裡佔篇幅...^^ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.230.147.193

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