Re: [劇研] 102-part 04 (翻譯)

看板wearefriends (Friends 六人行)作者Topanga (Believe, dream, try)時間14年前 (2011/07/01 20:29)推噓2(2推 0噓 1→)

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※ 引述《samchiu (閒祭秋)》之銘言： : Rachel: So, got any advice? : Y'know, as someone who's recently been- dumped? : 有什麼高見？就是，以最近剛被甩的人的立場？ : Ross: Well, you may wanna steer clear of the word 'dumped'. : Chances are he's gonna be this, : this broken shell of a man, : y'know, so you should try not to look too terrific, : I know it'll be hard. Or, y'know, uh, hey! : I'll go down there, and I'll give Barry back his ring, : and you can go with Carol and Susan to the OB/GYN... : 呃，你最好別用「甩」之類的詞，他有可能會是這樣， : 拖著空虛的軀殼，知道嗎，所以你最好不要看起來狀態很好， : 我知道這很困難。或者，就是，呃，嘿！ : 我去那邊，幫你把戒指拿去還給巴瑞， : 而你跟卡蘿還有蘇珊去看婦產科... 我對這裡this的翻譯有點意見我對這段台詞的解讀，斷句上認為應該是 Chances are he's gonna be this, this broken shell of a man, y'know, so you should try not to look too terrific. 那兩個 this 並不是真的在講「這樣」，我覺得是有點hesitation, 口語當中有些 this 並不是指示詞，而是套用語言學言談分析的解釋是 referent known to the speaker but not to the hearer 就是我說時心中有個指涉對象但我猜測你應該不知道很難用中文對等地去翻，如果是我的話會直接省略掉因為其實真的不影響解讀。 y'know, well, boy 這些都是discourse marker 功用是在言談上幫助說話者聽話者的解讀但沒有實質的意義的，如果是字幕工作者一般都會省略（贅字）（尤其上字幕通常一行都有字數限制） -- Sara : You just don't like sports. Grissom : That's not true. I've been a baseball fan my whole life. Sara : Baseball. Well, that figures. All the stats. Grissom : It's a beautiful sport. Sara : Since when are you interested in beauty? Grissom : Since I met you. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 111.252.126.4